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請幫我盯正履歷表
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請幫我看一下我的履歷表的格式,內容,文法和修辭或著一些小細節,幫我盯正一下個人資料部分我省略因字數太多 Job Objective To contribute to WEI MING company as a marketing personnel Education9/03 ~ 6/07 B.S.in International Trade, Tung-Hai University Taiwan Major: International Trade ... 顯示更多 請幫我看一下我的履歷表的格式,內容,文法和修辭或著一些小細節,幫我盯正一下個人資料部分我省略因字數太多 Job Objective To contribute to WEI MING company as a marketing personnel Education 9/03 ~ 6/07 B.S.in International Trade, Tung-Hai University Taiwan Major: International Trade Minor: Marketing, Management GPA: 73.76 Work Experience 12/04 ~ 9/05 DA DAO Language Institute TaichungCity English Teacher Assistant (part -time) ? Corrected homework ? Helped with discipline ? Conducted telephone testing ? Talked with parents and answer their questions ? Helped to guide students ? Helped to manufacture the English tests 7/04 ~ 8/04 CARREFOUR Store Nan-Tou City Salesman (part -time) ? Illustrated and promoted the electric shaver of Beelink for Dad's Festival Professional Skills ? Language skills: Mandarin Chinese, fluent in English , Fu-Ken(Taiwanese) ? Computers skills: Microsoft PowerPoint, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Excel, Photoshop, Flash MX ? Type: English:35 wpm ,Chinese: 40wpm Honors and Awards 9/05~ 1/06 Being a leader of class of International Trade in Tung-Hai University Taiwan 更新: 請問假如加了improves students 那Helped to guide students是否需要剔除
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Job Objective???????????????????? To utilize my international trade knowledge and professional skills and????????????????????? to?contribute to WEI MING Company as a member of your marketing team???????????????????? Education9/03?to 6/07???B.S. in International Trade, Tung-Hai University, Taiwan ???????????????????? Major: International Trade ???????????????????? Minor: Marketing, Management ???????????????????? GPA: 74/100???????????????????? Work Experience12/04?to 9/05 DA DAO Language Institute, Taichung, Taiwan????????????????????? English Teacher Assistant????????????????????? ? Corrected and graded homework???????????????????? ??Assisted in disciplinary processes???????????????????? ? Conducted telephone testings???????????????????? ? Maintained communication channels between parents and?the professor???????????????????? ? Provided?student guidance???????????????????? ? Assisted in creating English tests 7/04 to 8/04???CARREFOUR Store Nan-Tou City???????????????????? Salesperson???????????????????? ? Illustrated and promoted Beelink Electric Shaver for Dad's Festival???????????????????? ? Helped increase sales by xxxxx???????????????????? Professional Skills???????????????????? ? Language: Proficient in Mandarin Chinese, fluent in English and Taiwanese???????????????????? ? Computers: Proficient in Microsoft PowerPoint, Word and Excel, Photoshop,???????????????????????? Flash MX???????????????????? ? Typing: 35 wpm in English; 40wpm in Chinese???????????????????? Honors & Awards 9/05 to?1/06???Class Leader?of International Trade at Tung-Hai University, Taiwan
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請問假如加了improves students 那Helped to guide students是否需要剔除 2005-11-08 03:12:31 補充： 假如我改成這樣GPA: 73.76 in Taiwan’s scale也不是很理想嗎?|||||My suggestion is as followed: GPA: Different countries have different scale for GPA. In your case, it's probably between 0 and 100. In the U.S., GPA is between 0 to 4. I recommend that you specify the scale to avoid confusion. Work experience: Instead of telling your potential employers what you did, tell them what difference did you make to your for former employers. For example, when I saw "Helped to discipline", my immediate impression was you helped beat the crap out of the students. This will not appear to be a "good" thing as you try to get a job as a market personnel. Nevertheless, if you change it to "Improve students' integrity by helping them distinguish positive and negative behaviors". Now, this tells me that not only you are making a difference to our society, but you have the "communication skill" to do it. Communication skill is important as a marketing personnel. I hope this helps. Honors and Awards: Give the name fo the award. 2005-11-10 02:13:49 補充： if you provied some counseling to the students, you might want to add that (it'll take the place of "guiding").6AFDA1271C972566
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